In one word? Freaky.
What I love about this first chapter is it makes you feel like you are getting the answers you want, then at the end you look back and you’re like “what the hell was all of that, and where do I get more?”
I don’t know how many people out there have similar jobs, but it really hit the nail on the head with how I feel in some of my own personal experiences.
I need more … I need to know exactly what is going on here! Just when I feel like I’m getti g the answers I want, I start to want more… beautifully written, you really make me feel for Sylus.
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